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Fan Fiction / Poetry / The Commander
Submitted by Spartan[nK]Submitted on Mar 13, '08 and has 79 hits.
Author: WorldCommunist8
There he stood
Gun raised high
Staring danger
In the eye
Ratta-tat-tat
His rifle shouted in defiance
Deadly was his stare
At the zerg giants
He filled with rage
As he remembered
The many relationships
They had severed
He rallied his men
Gave them spirit to fight
Together they joined
Together they took flight
Valiantly they charged
Into the zerg swarm
Many were lost
But they still held form
For you see;
They'd follow him to victory
They'd follow him to defeat
For never was he in dismay
Always at his feet
He was their commander
A man of great strength
Of honor,Of courage
They'd follow him to any length
For this man
They greatly revered
Though to others
He was very much feared
Like a regular soldier
He fought 'longside his men
At the evening camp
He chatted with them then
In this camp's talk
Never you hear slander
Of this great man
Known as "The Commander"
There he stood
Gun raised high
Staring danger
In the eye
Ratta-tat-tat
His rifle shouted in defiance
Deadly was his stare
At the zerg giants
He filled with rage
As he remembered
The many relationships
They had severed
He rallied his men
Gave them spirit to fight
Together they joined
Together they took flight
Valiantly they charged
Into the zerg swarm
Many were lost
But they still held form
For you see;
They'd follow him to victory
They'd follow him to defeat
For never was he in dismay
Always at his feet
He was their commander
A man of great strength
Of honor,Of courage
They'd follow him to any length
For this man
They greatly revered
Though to others
He was very much feared
Like a regular soldier
He fought 'longside his men
At the evening camp
He chatted with them then
In this camp's talk
Never you hear slander
Of this great man
Known as "The Commander"
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